Eleanor Rigby

People, it's not ANN Coulter, it's MANN Coulter. Look at those hands, they aren't natural: Also, this is why I love the CBC and Mann Coulter because she's such a ...

The poem, if you take xanthan'ss suggestions, is fine. My only problem with it was your little rant at the beginning of the piece. You have to learn that we ...

I loved it; it was fantastic. The beginning was brilliantly written, and the end result of the piece came as such a shock to me, which was excellent! (I hope ...

Wow . . . you never cease to amaze me. That was actually one of the most fantastic poems I've read on the site. It's nice to see something that's ...

If you call this bad, then I wish that my poetry was as good as your bad poetry, lol. Mind you, it isn't the best I've read from you, but ...

I don't love it and I don't hate it. I do, however, like the rhyming scheme, but the concept has been horribly overdone, and I think that you're taking the ...

Aw, this makes me smile! :D It's cute, I like it. It's nice to see something that isn't horribly depressing and morbid. Personally, I think happiness is harder to do! ...

With this poem, you follow the very structured approach to poetry -- starting with something more particular and generalizing as you follow the lines through-- and I think that it ...

In my opinion, within this, you have the musings of a very good short story. However, as Emma said, I also feel that this is a bit rushed. What it ...

I like this! It's complex, yet quite simple. It seems as though you were enjoying one of those rarely euphoric moments in life where you can sit back, relax, pluck ...

You lie, you're not fourteen . . . are you? :wink: That was awesome! I wish I could have written that well when I was that age. (oh no, I've ...

By far, the best poem I've read on this site. Don't know if that's a compliment coming from me because I haven't read that many, but hey, take it as ...

This is awesome, I really enjoyed it! Personally, I'm a huge fan of any poetry that is free verse, and you've created an awesome style for yourself that flows so ...

This has definitely interesting subject matter and is full of details that help you understand the severity of the story, so I commend you on that. However, it seems to ...